Review Detail of Lullabybao in BECAUSE IT'S FIRST LOVE

Item: BECAUSE IT'S FIRST LOVE
Rating: 4.8

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LullabybaoLv33yrLullabybao

#honest review. I have read through all your chapter now and I want to give a very honest review. You have written a very good plot but it was lacking the feeling you get. Because sometimes the characters pov brings all the flare to a great novel. Try experimenting with your POV's. Try keeping the paragraphs fluid as possible. I've done this mistake and one kind reader corrected mine so I was able to develop my knowledge as a writer. P.s I hope you continue writing with all the passion you've got♥️😉

BECAUSE IT'S FIRST LOVE

Joskylar

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JoskylarAuthorJoskylar

Thank you for honest review. I'm reediting the book. that why I didn't uploaded new chapters yet. I'm trying to correct the mistake. I'm not a experienced writer and thank you for giving me suggestions it's lots helps me to learn.

3yr

LullabybaoLv3Lullabybao

I know for sure you will do better in the future. Never ever give up writing

Joskylar:Thank you for honest review. I'm reediting the book. that why I didn't uploaded new chapters yet. I'm trying to correct the mistake. I'm not a experienced writer and thank you for giving me suggestions it's lots helps me to learn.

3yr

JoskylarAuthorJoskylar

I won't give up again. I lost once and it took me 6 years to again try myself. I will learn and never gonna give up again. thank you for the support.

Lullabybao:I know for sure you will do better in the future. Never ever give up writing

3yr