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Blackcrust
BlackcrustLv24yr
2020-08-16 23:50

An interesting read. This story basically revolves around Jomaira(Jo) and Skylar (Lar) as the author likes to address them. The plot has the potential to break the hearts of many. The author is trying to bring something new to the table, and I like it very much. The story is setting in the modern world where Jomaira is heartbroken by Skylar after ditching her long-awaited date. She meets an accident, after which she meets James. Well, I think the author does a good job of bringing out the emotions in us; I hope my best wishes to the author. The effort author is putting in is worth the praise. Excited to see how the story unfolds. Keep it up and Good Luck.

BECAUSE IT'S FIRST LOVE

Joskylar
4.7
186 Chs

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Joskylar
JoskylarAuthor

Thank you so much dear. It's the best review It's really inspiring me to keep going. I have no words to express for your honest review. Thank you so much .

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Dara_Manuel
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I think this is a good story, their love story was unique , the suspense of what happened to Lar makes me want to read more, and the way you shifted the attention to Janes makes the story interesting... Keep up the good work.

4yr

Joskylar
JoskylarAuthor

Shamelessly I'm giving five start to myself as I want encourage myself. Hello guys, If you feel my story is interesting please support this story by your precious Reviews, comments, Gifts and vote. I just want to share with you guys about this story. BECAUSE IT'S FIRST LOVE is the first story I'm writing. As it my first story it is so precious to me. I tried my best to show all my emotions in it. When it come to painful chapter I cried lots while writing it as I think myself in that situation and for happiest chapter there is a smile on my face. So I felt this book. The story start with Joskylar a young girl finding about why love is the drug that makes us blind by reading a book. Jomira(Aira) and Skylar(Lar) and their love is the main concept of this story. And I tried to show their journey to find each other's love and the people they meet on their journey. This story have lots of characters and there is also more couple can seen in it. Each characters are introduced shortly so may you feel bored please bear with me. These all are the people who around Aira and Lar. And I'm giving there story too because these characters are important part of the story and you can only find why these are important if you keep reading the story. May you feel bored but I can grantee that this story is one of the unique one and there is lots of sweet and hurtful moment in it. I won't disappoint you guys. As we hear a book can't judge by it's cover like wise a few chapters can't judge a book, If you keep reading you will feel interesting. I hope I won't disappoint you guys. I'm hardworking to give a smile on your face. I hope you guys give me support as I'm a beginner in this field and please forgive me for my fault and do correct me too. I hope you guys take care of me. Love you all lots.

4yr
Joskylar
JoskylarAuthor

Thank to all the readers who reading my book. And for such a honest review I'm really glad for that. And thank you guys for giving me suggestions . I will try to edit my story. Please give such a honest reviews. Don't hesitate to show me my fault I love it. From that I can learn more. Please gives reviews. Thanks to all my lovely readers.

4yr
raima_alam
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Great idea and keep going. I hope to read more chapters like this in future. It is so nice with deep emotions. I literally am obsessed with it.

4yr
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