Review Detail of PonjuPonju in Ori/GEN

it just needs about 40+ chapters to really become noticed though. that's also the only point at which Webnovel may contact you about the Premium feature for authors and such. not like those scam messages you got with that have the @outlook emails...

if funding is an issue, most author's set up a support site for their works on some of the crowdfunding sites for writers, such as Patreon. Then later post it here with Webnovel premium, and then sell the finished works on Amazon. Webnovel may contact you after you have a certain number of readers. But they will NEVER post a message to the comments sections or under Reviews areas. Those are almost always Scams trying to exploit the author, their works, or their financial info... Just delete those... And hope to see more of this novel soon!!!

I have made this book for money🙄. I would love that I could get money but this is mainly for fun and enjoyment. also this is the second one that I chose as a test run but I hope to continue this. no not hope I will!

just throwing this out there, but hope it helps you out. _________ not sure, but maybe fixing your TAGS would help draw more readers. not seeing anything fan-related atm for instance, and it might be best to avoid that for a lot of reasons. You've actually got some odd ones. Currently: #Action #Adventure #System #Harem (with the slash over the e) #Fan-Fic #Dungeon #Bloodline #Pets #Calm and Intelligent MC #Kind Male Lead would recommend tossing most of these, since they are uncommonly used in book searches. would focus on what your book has so far, based on the general browsing filters: #Action (or #Adventure depending) #Sci-Fi (or #sci-fi or #Science Fiction) #Male Lead (or #Male MC) - unsure if also a #Female Lead (two different pov? A if separate maybe for both Male and Female readers - maybe) #System (or #SYSTEM) #Litrpg (or #LITRPG - books with system/game life elements or dungeons, etc. it's a whole genre) #Fantasy (or #FANTASY) #Harem (without the special letters or #HAREM or toss it, as it is usually attached to R-18/***** books or light #Comedy novels) #Fan-Fic (would toss this one, and just keep your work original, since it isn't a fan-work yet and would receive much better review without this as a tag or in the story = more readers) #Dungeon (or #dungeon or #DUNGEON, but only if it'll be actively used in the book, meaning there'd have be some kind of dungeon crawl and not just a System Status screen. didn't see anything for this yet.) #Bloodline (might toss, since it's a minor Tag search unless critical to story later.) #Pets (would toss, since seems unrelated atm.) #Calm and Intelligent MC (toss it. replace with #Male Lead/ #Female Lead or #Male MC/ #Female MC) #Kind Male Lead (toss this one, too. most searches are very generalized and being too specific can keep people from finding the book) other applicable tags might be: something to do with #Dimensions or #Multi-Dimensions (but don't recommend it as too specific) #Romance (if any?) #Crafting #Starships #Mechs (#Mecha, #Mechas, etc. if applicable) #Mech Designer (doubtful?) #Space Opera (a genre mostly in space) #Evolution (?) #Mutation (?) #Shipgirls (?) #Apocolypse (?) ...and other stuff. last ones were just if-thens. Also, I like the book name... but... it's a problem for you. it's hard to search it. Maybe call it Book One of the [Ori/GEN] Series and renamed the book to something easy to look up. think of it like a kid trying to pull the title of the book up on Google; is it hard to remember? anyway, I'm shutting up now. maybe this stuff will help you out. also push your book on the forum. should be something on there to tell you how. I'll be peeking back in to read a bit more by the fireplace with my coco! ☕😘

also, I know the current cover us someone else's, but it's what first peeked my interest. if you have to change it later, recommend using one with a similar design. Girl + wrecked battlesuit = "hmm. what's this?" 😉

Hiatus?😶