Review Detail of RazorIsSharp in 1

This is literally the first girl love story that I ever read, and I enjoyed reading it. The only thing I wish was a little different is the size of the paragraphs. Sometimes, on computer, it can be a little bit harder to read large paragraphs, so maybe break the paragraphs up. I also found switching from her thoughts to her actions a little bit jarring. I think keeping the topic of the paragraph more uniform might help. For instance, when you want to show her thinking, make it its own paragraph, and then actions can happen on other paragraphs. Other than that, I feel like it has potential, and I like the thought evoking introductions and overall the tenderness of the prose. It made me feel warm inside and stuff. :)