While there are only a few chapters this far, I will say they are very long and meaty, so really there is much more content here than meets the eye. Story is well wrotten with few spelling or grammatical errors. MC seems to be a bit of a hot head so far, so there is plenty of room for character development. Overall a solid piece of literature that is more thought out and better composed than most of what is on WN. Excellent work!

I won't lie it's a bit long at first, but then the chapters balanced the characters are unique and the world is pretty vivid and the lore is pretty deep and original, I am definitely in love with this book!

The novel is a bit lighter than others in its genre. It’s set in a world without rules and yet the heroes still face dire consequences for their actions. It is amazing how the ML just fits right in and immerses himself in the new world from the start. I like that the characters seem fleshed out and are given more emotional motivation for their actions in the later chapters. The concept of the story is a lot of fun and I hope the writer continues with his updates.

Many would say that the writing's long, but that's what I love most about this book. All of the information given is interesting and helps understand the world background better. The wordings and structuring is pretty good and no grammatical errors just makes this one perfect book. So, loving it definitely! Keep going!!!

keep updating you can do it ....I must say that the chapters were very well described and tbh it was very relatable and i dk why i keep remembering my stuffs...

What a good way to start a novel. I do wonder, where are you getting to this idea from because this story is really impressive. I could hardly find any grammatical errors and the beginning got me hooked. This story is fascinating and I'll employ other readers to give this book a shot. It also has a prologue to begin with. What more do you need from a book?.

I will say one thing and one thing only. It's long, like really long, but filled with so much information that it makes you want to read more to find out just how much it going on. Good work, makes one feel as if you're reading an actual paperback book.

Well-written novel that takes its time with introducing the protagonists. The chapters are structured in such a way that it's easy to follow the changing perspectives. Keep up the good work, author! Your world-building is awesome!

I literally screamed at how long and interesting the first chapter was. Darrel's arrogance I would say is good in some parts and uncalled for in others. Like, he should tone down his arrogance for the time being and focus more on plans to escape, then deal with his enemies after he has gotten his freedom. With the way he angers almost everyone, I can't imagine what would have happened to him if he wasn't the MC. Grammar and writing skills are super-duper interesting. I literally fell in love with it. A job well done.

The world background is vivid like you can imagine how everything is happening and the author is a writing genius. This book is surely going to be a big hit