good work, but try to not end this prematurely like your other tho, some of them feels too rushed both in character development or the story progress itself. this one have far wider range of possibility, to try to not messed it up
SlyOW
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LIKEHey author! Just a suggestion but by chance if you dont mind taking time out of your day could you make a little chapter before ch1 with important info as the story goes along? Like gear and ranks of the world really just so that sort of info is there for readers who like to know that stuff?
SlyOW:I'll do my best.