As a shameless Author, I would like to give myself 5 stars (So don't mind me :) ). Just to be clear to anyone who not yet see or ignore the synopsis, this is my first time writing and English is not my main language. So I appreciate it if anyone is willing to notify me if there is a grammar wrong as I try to Improve myself into a better writer. Also, feel free to give me some question and suggestion, if the suggestion is good, I will try to apply it in the novel.

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Well... That's exist too. This story feels like written by 8 grader if you get my drift. Guy who doesn't understand when he doing a pure cringe or pandering to his own "concept of cool" too much. So what do we have here. Crossover between fate and dxd-because that's so easy to work, especially when you understand that fate magic is too much different from dxd. But hey, that's just work. Over powered family - I am not interested in them and talking about how cool my parents is, became stupid when you аdult yourself. Chapters on "important talk" that actually not special. Not 3 chapters in a row. That's was useless. Somehow , he's parents and they family relationships still wasn't fleshed at all. That's kinda impressive for 12 chapters of childhood. 👀👀👀 And of course, heroic kind mc.... Sigh. Very interesting character, I assure. Conclusion. That's exist.

this novel has potential the character and how the story goes I hope it is not like other novels that goes very fast the mc is super arrogant op who does what he wants So how is the novel going very well at a stable pace I give it 5 well-deserved stars

Sorry but i deleted my first review because i thought the book deserved a better rating and like last time there are a bunch of grammar mistakes and i think downloading standard grammarly would help a lot because i have first hand experience using it on my own fanfiction and it works i use standard not premium. By the way standard is completely free.

This story is great You really put a lot of effort into making it, but I suggest you to just make the notification exp he (mc) receive Shorter or when he's in the battlefield you just make the final exp he get instead of one on one, that make you easier and reader not boring seeing it, not all but i'm sure that not all people read it. It just suggestion up to you whatever do it or no🙂 keep it up your good job. Fighting!!!

So Far So Good, The fan-fic has many potential if I have to say, If the Author does update daily then I will change my review to 5 stars. Well, hope you don't drop this fan-fic author.

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