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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv53yr
2021-03-23 19:35

Well... That's exist too. This story feels like written by 8 grader if you get my drift. Guy who doesn't understand when he doing a pure cringe or pandering to his own "concept of cool" too much. So what do we have here. Crossover between fate and dxd-because that's so easy to work, especially when you understand that fate magic is too much different from dxd. But hey, that's just work. Over powered family - I am not interested in them and talking about how cool my parents is, became stupid when you аdult yourself. Chapters on "important talk" that actually not special. Not 3 chapters in a row. That's was useless. Somehow , he's parents and they family relationships still wasn't fleshed at all. That's kinda impressive for 12 chapters of childhood. 👀👀👀 And of course, heroic kind mc.... Sigh. Very interesting character, I assure. Conclusion. That's exist.

Reincarnated with Endless-System

Tatsuke44
4.6
62 Chs

Liked by 14 people

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

The story is fucking stupid. Like woah. How this have positive reviews at all?!

3yr
6
Tatsuke44
Tatsuke44Author

It's your opinion, so if you don't like it then don't bother read it since I'm making this fan-fic only for fun.

Yuri_is_Ntr:The story is fucking stupid. Like woah. How this have positive reviews at all?!
3yr
2
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

👀👀👀How did you get such high score?

Tatsuke44:It's your opinion, so if you don't like it then don't bother read it since I'm making this fan-fic only for fun.
3yr
4
Tatsuke44
Tatsuke44Author

people just like my books thats all though, Its your opinion that you dislike it. I know that dxd and fate is unstable story that is why i say this is probably a wish fufilment story since many element clash with each other

Yuri_is_Ntr:👀👀👀How did you get such high score?
3yr
1
Nah_U_Stupid
Nah_U_StupidLv2

Grammar... smh...

3yr
Nah_U_Stupid
Nah_U_StupidLv2

I saw your deleted comment there bro. Calling me a çûñt is really childish of you. So please just shut the **** up when someone is correcting your mistakes you dense apple.

Tatsuke44:people just like my books thats all though, Its your opinion that you dislike it. I know that dxd and fate is unstable story that is why i say this is probably a wish fufilment story since many element clash with each other
3yr
2
Nah_U_Stupid
Nah_U_StupidLv2

Ah! About that çûñt comment. I am very sorry for I replied in the wrong comment. It was actually the other guy. Here's the photo since you wanted proof. Sorry man, I should've checked who I was replying to. It was the guy who reviewed who said it.

Tatsuke44:It's your opinion, so if you don't like it then don't bother read it since I'm making this fan-fic only for fun.
3yr
1
Nah_U_Stupid
Nah_U_StupidLv2

Right back at ya çûñt.

Yuri_is_Ntr:👀👀👀How did you get such high score?
3yr
Tatsuke44
Tatsuke44Author

ah dont worry about it

Nah_U_Stupid:Ah! About that çûñt comment. I am very sorry for I replied in the wrong comment. It was actually the other guy. Here's the photo since you wanted proof. Sorry man, I should've checked who I was replying to. It was the guy who reviewed who said it.
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3yr
Nah_U_Stupid
Nah_U_StupidLv2

My Pleasure.

Tatsuke44:ah dont worry about it
3yr
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

I deleted comments ? I have no way to do this. Author could, I don't . So....are you degenerate?

Nah_U_Stupid:I saw your deleted comment there bro. Calling me a çûñt is really childish of you. So please just shut the **** up when someone is correcting your mistakes you dense apple.
3yr
Nah_U_Stupid
Nah_U_StupidLv2

Hold up. You can't delete your OWN comment? You are clearly mentally incapacitated

Yuri_is_Ntr:I deleted comments ? I have no way to do this. Author could, I don't . So....are you degenerate?
3yr
1
Nah_U_Stupid
Nah_U_StupidLv2

It's already clear in your name that you really have a very "special" attitude. Fûçkîñg Çûñt.

Yuri_is_Ntr:I deleted comments ? I have no way to do this. Author could, I don't . So....are you degenerate?
3yr
1
HeepyterV17
HeepyterV17Lv3

XD Moment

3yr
1
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Tatsuke44
Tatsuke44Author

As a shameless Author, I would like to give myself 5 stars (So don't mind me :) ). Just to be clear to anyone who not yet see or ignore the synopsis, this is my first time writing and English is not my main language. So I appreciate it if anyone is willing to notify me if there is a grammar wrong as I try to Improve myself into a better writer. Also, feel free to give me some question and suggestion, if the suggestion is good, I will try to apply it in the novel.

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Stand_TheWorld777
Stand_TheWorld777Lv3

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4yr
SCP3812
SCP3812Lv3

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daoist832572
daoist832572Lv4

this novel has potential the character and how the story goes I hope it is not like other novels that goes very fast the mc is super arrogant op who does what he wants So how is the novel going very well at a stable pace I give it 5 well-deserved stars

4yr
Grass_Cutter
Grass_CutterLv4

Sorry but i deleted my first review because i thought the book deserved a better rating and like last time there are a bunch of grammar mistakes and i think downloading standard grammarly would help a lot because i have first hand experience using it on my own fanfiction and it works i use standard not premium. By the way standard is completely free.

4yr
Cath_bule
Cath_buleLv3

This story is great You really put a lot of effort into making it, but I suggest you to just make the notification exp he (mc) receive Shorter or when he's in the battlefield you just make the final exp he get instead of one on one, that make you easier and reader not boring seeing it, not all but i'm sure that not all people read it. It just suggestion up to you whatever do it or no🙂 keep it up your good job. Fighting!!!

4yr
Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

im not really into reading a year old being so op I would have considered if he was a teen so I'm holding this for a while. ill be back when there's more chapter cus i don't like reading a 5 year old beating up op characters :))

3yr
Saint_Brocoli
Saint_BrocoliLv1

So Far So Good, The fan-fic has many potential if I have to say, If the Author does update daily then I will change my review to 5 stars. Well, hope you don't drop this fan-fic author.

4yr
KyaKyaLL
KyaKyaLLLv1

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