Looking past the couple of grammatical errors in the beginning, I loved reading this. The descriptions allow for the reader to feel as if they are really in the book, as well as explain whats going on so the reader isn't confused. I liked the different characters and their personalities as well. I agree with the other readers that the magic descriptions are amazing. I also liked the pace of the book. I liked how it started, and felt that the pace moved to fit the events. Thoroughly enjoyable!!
MrCarbonite
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