Review Detail of varean in The World Undone

I love fantasy stories especially when it comes to dealing with magic. I only read a few chapters and I'm hooked. I like your writing style and your description is wonderful. Good job! Though I usually like reading short paragraphs, I feel like your paragraphs are too long but some people might like it like that so don't worry. The length of the chapter is pretty long but some people like that long chapter like me. You should keep updating. Keep it up!