Review Detail of whiteribbon27 in Hellviana For The Elite and Extraordinaire

For starters the story is nice, it has a my hero academia vibe going on in it, maybe you got inspired by it. It's nice. there is no problem with the grammar, the wall of text kinda gets you, from a perspective of a reader you're going to get tired, reading it. typos here and there too. This is my honest review no hate, overall the story is nice but it needs quite a lot of edits. That's all from me. don't lose the motivation to write I'm cheering you on. 💯