Item: Hellviana For The Elite and Extraordinaire
Rating: 4
Author: whiteribbon27

whiteribbon27Lv104yr

2020-12-09 17:11

For starters the story is nice, it has a my hero academia vibe going on in it, maybe you got inspired by it. It's nice. there is no problem with the grammar, the wall of text kinda gets you, from a perspective of a reader you're going to get tired, reading it. typos here and there too. This is my honest review no hate, overall the story is nice but it needs quite a lot of edits. That's all from me. don't lose the motivation to write I'm cheering you on. 💯

Hellviana For The Elite and Extraordinaire

MadTitan_2199

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MadTitan_2199Author

Thank you for the review 💜 I'll do my best!😆

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