Review Detail of lorenzo_miguel in Marvel's Mutant Gamer (Being rewritten)

( Google translator ) . MY OPINION: this fanfic will start to fall. . . . . I DON'T LIKE TO COMMENT ABOUT FANFIC, BUT AS I LIKED CHAPTERS 1 TO 13, I DECIDED TO WRITE THIS COMMENT . . . THESE ARE SOME OF THE REASONS FOR I THINK IT WILL FALL: 1: the author made the MC "meet" many powerful people from one hour to another example: Ororo, Wanda, Logan, Groot. Now comes the Fantastic Four To make matters worse in this last chapter (15) the Author wrote that Susan Storm is a mother, in other words, there is already a GOD (Franklin Richards) on Earth who can control reality (that's what I saw on the wiki about him). The Author wrote that the MC should get stronger before getting involved with these powerful people. But there he is getting involved with these powerful people almost every time. 2: Author is developing the powers of the MC too slowly for so many powerful beings to appear. . . . . THERE ARE MANY THINGS I WOULD LIKE TO SAY SO MUCH TO THINGS PESSIMAS AND FAVORABLE OF THIS FANFIC, BUT I DON'T LIKE TO WRITE SO MUCH ON THE INTERNET (I AM LAZY) . . . . I FEEL VERY IF SOMEONE FEELS OFFENDED WITH THIS COMM