This is gamer fic and I love these. grammar is perfect I love how you are writting german accent on english it makes story much more realistic. Will is a cool character he doesnt have 10000000 complexes. Or some oversued plot. I love his character and gamer fits him perfectly. All in all I think this fic with few more chapters is worth of Top 10 in FF section so author Good job and continue working hard.

To be honest this is probably the most detailed n consistent gamer ability novel out there so far it seems Mc is gonna take the hero simp role ima join avengers and defend earth because being a villain an stealing is bad with my powers ima be a symbol of justice yayyy that’s the type of vibe I’m getting so far once you get past chapter 5 considering he surrendered himself to that bold magician thot unless he’s gonna stab her in the back after getting stronger but she’s got him on a leashe already to see if he’s has bad intentions or not I don’t see him being a villain or anti hero you’re better off just reading the real manga of the gamer atleast he ain’t a slave or a simp I might change my mind about this novel but I doubt it but let’s see

A horribly written first-person story. Writing Quality: 2/5 It left nothing to be desired. The story is written like we're on the MC minds. Constants ramblings and random thoughts appeared out of nowhere some of them basically gave no relevance to the story. The author gave information about some characters that probably will have a minor role. While he gave some information about the characters, he forgot to gave crucial information to certain things (continued on the world background). Some words are misspelled, which ruins your immersion. Mind you this is a first-person story. A point of view that is synonymous with self-inserts where immersion is an important factor. The grammar is well enough, that I don't have a brain freeze while reading it. Updates: 5/5 nothing to say. Story: 3 So far, there's nothing going on yet. MC's ambition vaguely described. As of writing this, MC literally cause chaos without any total reason. The build-up of the next probable events is meh. We know that he will be confronted by the mutants. But the way it was made. It's just... I don't know. Basically, the latest chapter intervenes the fight the X-Men and the Brotherhood of Mutants. Mind you for no reason at all. There are multiple possibilities on how the author could handle this. Kurt (Nightcrawler) could watch the MC due to Kurt thought the MC was a robot. Then he combines clues together regarding the weird behavior of the MC. Remember! The MC is only Kurt's friend. That reason is enough for someone to be curious to investigate the MC. Galactus is already mentioned in the story, everyone knew omnipotent beings and aliens exists. Even if the mc wants to cause some chaos. He could just do it once and then leave. Character: 3 Pretty much the MC is mentally retarded or autistic. Or both. Or mentally unstable. That much is to say. A teenager won't act like that. Discovering that your body works like a game? He pierced his body. PIERCED. NOT STAB OR CUT. PIERCE. A KNIFE GOES THROUGH HIS HAND. A normal teenager won't do that unless they have a special 'past'. If he cut his hand it would be understandable. Some of his actions are incomprehensible or illogical. Of course, you could just have it off teenager 'things'. One of his actions that are absolutely dumb. MC uses a skill on a tree in a public space. We don't know where he uses it because the author didn't describe the place. There are no mentions regarding his family or backstory. We only know his grandma. Even then we don't know his relation. The author just assumes we know everything. Probably going to pull a surprise regarding MC background. Family is one of the most to build someone's personality. You can't just make an edge lord with a happy loving family. A past that is fully described would clarify the MC personality greatly. The side characters aren't explored yet. I don't have a hope the author would develop the character greatly. Then again the author described side characters with details. Which I would guess from the wiki. But the characters most likely have personality and won't be developed. Some problems I have regarding Jean and Scott's relationship are that the author could be explained why she is mad at Scott. Since Jean is probably a candidate for the female lead. World background: 2 The author just assume we know everything. It's fine if you don't describe the world really detailed. But places that have high importance has none. The school that the MC attends literally just being described as a school. No names, buildings shape, and so on. It has characters that are important in the Marvel world. Literally, some of the X-Men are there and the Brotherhood of Mutants too. Also Kamar-Taj, another major point of the story, that isn't described. Places such as ID or Instant Dungeon could also be described vaguely. A story that you read on from the perspective of the protagonist without any details is simply mind-boggling to read. Stop assuming your readers know everything.

Genuinely good fanfic . I hope the author doesn’t drop it 😄. Keep up the good work .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... ........ .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... ......................................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... ............................. .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... .......................... ..........................

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Author If your reading this please dont listen to those negative comments,it's a great story, I had a good time reading your work. Hope you don't drop this. Now unto the review,I only got to chap 14. First of all MC's actually relatable,he's not some battle hardened vet that got reincarnated or some thing,nor is he some pervert that wanna **** every beauty he sees.He's a ****,a shut in,and he's going through puberty. It's a good crossover between the gamer manwa and the MCU.Has a simple but good backstory for the mc,it explains why he's socially awkward. I recomend you guys to give this a read.I probably haven't read enough to give this novel a proper review but it's my second fav marvel fic on this platform. First's dovah kin by large_frva

( Google translator ) . MY OPINION: this fanfic will start to fall. . . . . I DON'T LIKE TO COMMENT ABOUT FANFIC, BUT AS I LIKED CHAPTERS 1 TO 13, I DECIDED TO WRITE THIS COMMENT . . . THESE ARE SOME OF THE REASONS FOR I THINK IT WILL FALL: 1: the author made the MC "meet" many powerful people from one hour to another example: Ororo, Wanda, Logan, Groot. Now comes the Fantastic Four To make matters worse in this last chapter (15) the Author wrote that Susan Storm is a mother, in other words, there is already a GOD (Franklin Richards) on Earth who can control reality (that's what I saw on the wiki about him). The Author wrote that the MC should get stronger before getting involved with these powerful people. But there he is getting involved with these powerful people almost every time. 2: Author is developing the powers of the MC too slowly for so many powerful beings to appear. . . . . THERE ARE MANY THINGS I WOULD LIKE TO SAY SO MUCH TO THINGS PESSIMAS AND FAVORABLE OF THIS FANFIC, BUT I DON'T LIKE TO WRITE SO MUCH ON THE INTERNET (I AM LAZY) . . . . I FEEL VERY IF SOMEONE FEELS OFFENDED WITH THIS COMM

Awesome novel with a great and fun mc and proper integration of The Gamer system. The updates are going great and i would love it if the author keeps the update rate same or maybe even increase it 😜

I really like this story and hope it continues. As for the stars I've given ( the world background is from xmen and marvel, so only a few stars and also so far the stability of updates or good for now). Hope this continues.