Item: Finding the Lost Star
Rating: 5
Author: Ynna_Britannia

Ynna_BritanniaModerator4yr

2020-08-07 11:34

I love it~ 💖 The Author was able to capture the charm of the First Person POV which relies heavily on the narrator’s personality and character. Astra, the main character and female lead, is a very effective narrator. The way the story flows through her lenses is great; it’s entertaining and it keeps the readers wanting more. I think that selecting First Person POV also does great to the novel itself since we get to know Astra better; what goes in her mind, and what exactly happened all those years ago through her flashbacks. There are only snippets of it for now, but the change of scene from the present time to the past is fluid, as if we are in the shoes of Astra experiencing a sudden flashback. The other characters are endearing too and I wanna see how they will develop in the future. Also, the interactions between characters are dynamic and natural. I look forward to reading more about the world and setting of the story in chapters to come. So far we know that the novel is set in Hollywood and I look forward to that being explored more. The novel’s updates are stable and have been continuous. ✨ Great job! 🥂 Keep it up, and more power Author Starr! 👏👏👏

Finding the Lost Star

StarrSwan

4.9

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Liked by 10 people

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StarrSwanAuthor

Wow thank you so much!!! I’m so glad you love the story. I look forward to you and all my readers knowing what will come next! ❤️

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StarrSwanAuthor

Wow thank you so much!!! I’m so glad you love the story. I look forward to you and all my readers knowing what will come next! ❤️

4yr

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