Review Detail of Solomon_Bourne in I’m Superman

This is a pretty good realistic take on the idea of superman clones/children running around, it's pretty depressing though and the lack of stable updates isn't doing any favors, but there's a lot of potential and I don't know the situation but personally, I think the Author just needs to believe in himself. You have a lot of talent, write your ideas in stages, this way you'll have more of a structured system which will help you keep track of where you are and allow you to have more freedom in the writing aspect.