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Review Detail of TearStrings in Redemption Of The Yandere Villain [Hiatus]

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HONEST Review.• The writing quality is not that bad, although there are some parts that I find rather confusing due to the grammatical errors but I can understand and see the Author's vision for their story, the writing just needs improvement which I'm sure will happen as the story progresses on. (I love how the Author writes about family dynamics and the emotions of the Mc).•The story development is also good. I like how a time skip is issued on some unnecessary parts, and the filler chapters are also quite interesting, not boring.•The Character designs are pretty much fair and average. I like how each characters have their own spice and story. (I freaking hate Eullian.)•I LOVE the frequent updates. That's it.•The world building is commendable for it's originality, and it catches my interest rather easily.

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Redemption Of The Yandere Villain [Hiatus]

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CKhimira
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Thank you so much for your honest review [heart]. English is only my second language so I understand the mention of grammatical errors and typos that cannot be avoided. What I appreciate is your understanding of the story which amazes me because it can fill the gap of my cons. I will take note of some of your concerns and thrive to meet your expectations. Thank you so much, I will work hard to develop my writing skills [heart] [heart] [love] [blow kisses]

CKhimira
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Also If you have questions about the story or some part you think is a plothole please feel free so I can explain [smle] [heart]

CKhimira:Thank you so much for your honest review [heart]. English is only my second language so I understand the mention of grammatical errors and typos that cannot be avoided. What I appreciate is your understanding of the story which amazes me because it can fill the gap of my cons. I will take note of some of your concerns and thrive to meet your expectations. Thank you so much, I will work hard to develop my writing skills [heart] [heart] [love] [blow kisses]