First off, I love the synopsis and the plot. You have such a good way of describing, it grabs the reader's attention. Although the starting scene was a bit confusing, along with a little purple prose here and there. Besides that, this is a novel I would definitely love to read sometime. Also, I suggest you provide a bit more of a background in the synopsis so the reader's knows what the story is about. Other than that, an absolutely amazing story!!!
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