Woah! you have an interesting plot here and I'm sure this would be a hit if you do it in the right way, which you are by the way. One piece of advice would be to proofread again. Like for thoughts, don't use brackets as it disrupts the flow. Either you could just add it as a description or use apostrophe. Good luck, Author!
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