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2020-09-06 00:18

I am liking so far. Cant wait to see what you have store for us.I am liking so far. Cant wait to see what you have store for us.I am liking so far. Cant wait to see what you have store for us.

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It's not bad for a read. But only for a certain type of people. First of all, the mc is morally questionable. More that is not an issue as it has been mentioned in the tags, but the reason for it seems a bit too forced. You don't mind that, go on and read it. Secondly, he is getting a dirt of a system, and well it's kinda like those destiny things. Like he has to save the world because he was called by someone to this side. I personally hate such novels where things are forced on the MC. So, basically the story is like, this. Harry Potter world is invaded by a powerful creature. Everybody dies. Then, they create a system to save humanity by choosing a random guy , who, the system will decide, is suitable or not, and sending him to the past to fight again. And if I am not wrong, Linda was sent back too. Though, I am not sure as I didn't bother reading further. Mc is a failure in life, because he fit involved in some random gang bulshit and had his family killed. Now he was in the path of revenge, which he said at, miserably and then he dies. Here comes the system, which attaches to MC, makes him a magician. Now, MC, suddenly has urged to learn magic. No matter how you think about it, guys mind is being manipulated. And then he is reborn in an orphanage .That's when I stopped. Ur not because of Orphanage, but bcoz of mind control. So, why am I writing it? That's because I wasted 1 hour on this shirt and don't want you to do the same. I think you can judge if it suits you or not but. The synopsis was literal shit as the best I made out of it was that mc would join in middle of school year, suddenly , in the body of don't character or something. The Way he writes is not bad, but you will soon loser interest and find yourself skipping chapters. Of Course all the characters are mentally retarded but that's the least of my worries, as you have to expect that from such novels. I am pretty sure, many of you will like it (seeing the views) .... hah. Just don't waste time in prologue you'll be disappointed.

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