Firstly, well done! I was already hooked from the synopsis, and I only planned to read a few chapters but I ended up reading more. I love the characters but I'm hoping for more description of their emotions. The plot is wonderful as the scenes flow smoothly. I'm excited at how the story will develop in the future chapters. However, it would be great if one day you'll do some editing with the early chapters since there are quite a few errors in the sentences. Despite that, I believe that this book has the potential to do wonders, and attract more readers as time goes. All the best!
AnonnaRahman13
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