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AnairaG72
AnairaG72Lv24yr
2020-08-11 10:56

Honestly, it was a quite fun read despite having a dark first chapter. I like the way you use your adjectives btw, It's a great help especially in terms of world background.

Dropped for now

J1L2D3
4.8
7 Chs

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J1L2D3
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Lol of course im rating my own book. Anyway, i might drop the book once the competition is over, idk though.

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Aryna_Stan
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It took off from a gloomy start but it turned around pretty quickly from there, if you're an isekai/cultivation fan you should definitely give this a chance.

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Drapetomaniac12
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It's a light read. I liked reading it. There are a few grammatical errors but they can be fixed after reading once. Author has done a good job. All the best!

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Yukina_Miu
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Its a somewhat dark story but still enjoyable, the plot reminds me of an isekai but still not. The writing quality is good so there isn't much to complain about, keep up the good job

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