Review Detail of bilu619 in In Avatar World With Naruto System
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First of all i love your work absalutly no hate here But You know i do not want to be that guy but i have to be By giving him all that your just writings your self into a whole which you cant claw your way out of U could have made do with tayjutsu nad biyakugan and he stil would be as op you as want and not break the world Shrigan is a hax, six path is a hax,
In Avatar World With Naruto System
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Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
amaturewriter:whilst I agree with u, I will say ur ENGRISH is torturous **: ur ' The Adventure Hunter in one piece ' is this dropped?
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
amaturewriter:whilst I agree with u, I will say ur ENGRISH is torturous **: ur ' The Adventure Hunter in one piece ' is this dropped?
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
amaturewriter:whilst I agree with u, I will say ur ENGRISH is torturous **: ur ' The Adventure Hunter in one piece ' is this dropped?
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
amaturewriter:whilst I agree with u, I will say ur ENGRISH is torturous **: ur ' The Adventure Hunter in one piece ' is this dropped?
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
amaturewriter:whilst I agree with u, I will say ur ENGRISH is torturous **: ur ' The Adventure Hunter in one piece ' is this dropped?
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
amaturewriter:whilst I agree with u, I will say ur ENGRISH is torturous **: ur ' The Adventure Hunter in one piece ' is this dropped?
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
amaturewriter:whilst I agree with u, I will say ur ENGRISH is torturous **: ur ' The Adventure Hunter in one piece ' is this dropped?
Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
amaturewriter:whilst I agree with u, I will say ur ENGRISH is torturous **: ur ' The Adventure Hunter in one piece ' is this dropped?
bilu619:Yah i know my grammar sacks balls but and i do tend to misspell words And no i just haven't got the time to get dow to write it i have three chpters i worte before life decided to kick me in the balls
Any thing realy do u have any critic you want to sy about my work plot wise or character protrying wise Any thing would be helpful
amaturewriter:what do u mean by Any devices?
Any thing realy do u have any critic you want to sy about my work plot wise or character protrying wise Any thing would be helpful
amaturewriter:what do u mean by Any devices?
Any thing realy do u have any critic you want to sy about my work plot wise or character protrying wise Any thing would be helpful
amaturewriter:what do u mean by Any devices?
Any thing realy do u have any critic you want to sy about my work plot wise or character protrying wise Any thing would be helpful
amaturewriter:what do u mean by Any devices?
ur eng in ur bk is fine...just use grammarly but over there its readable...as for the story, it was interesting but not much content, only thing I can say is to not look at the world like an anime, but rather for what it is, a fked up place,,,and hopefully MC isnt a friendly dude, or will follow cannon cast...make it before..more interesting
bilu619:Any thing realy do u have any critic you want to sy about my work plot wise or character protrying wise Any thing would be helpful