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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv43yramaturewriter

Actually interesting, seeing as how u've upgraded the avatar world to match naruto skill-sets...still, the sharigan, sage mode, lightening body, six gate, and the rest of the hax **** in naruto shouldnt be added, that was stupid...but GL, u will need it cause they hax ****. interested to see how u'll over come this and what you will do. As for story, its interesting, but too soon I guess, hopefully u wont make MC a retard, follow cannon cast or be some heroic *****...suggestions: add ur own ****, make the world larger, the spirit world could be some **** like las noches?. Add alchemly from F.M.A...it could be like a unique **** that non benders with high chi can do?, IDK, bending elements is weak against naruto ****, so maybe give some other **** to the avatar people. Any relationship build it. I still think its stupid considering how vastly different the worlds are in power [despite u equalizing it cause naruto has hax ****], but it is interesting..so GL I guess. interested to see what u do **: the first review shall remain as a fk u

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In Avatar World With Naruto System

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cade2065
cade2065Lv7cade2065

Lol, how many times did you say Shit?

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

as many times I have to...its not ****, its like dope ****....not everyday ****, or some****, neither some common ****...I dont know man, it like ****, its nice. SHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,it

cade2065:Lol, how many times did you say Shit?
cade2065
cade2065Lv7cade2065

Lol

amaturewriter:as many times I have to...its not ****, its like dope ****....not everyday ****, or some****, neither some common ****...I dont know man, it like ****, its nice. SHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,itSHIT,****,sh,it
jackiechann
jackiechannLv5jackiechann

Are there moms, though?

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

do not know as of yet

jackiechann:Are there moms, though?