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Shameless author review here. My first time writing a novel so please ignore my mistakes and everyone can help correct it. I will do a more better review when it has more chapters!
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Horny_feet
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I mean I like the plot but it's just soooooooo slow, like when he evolved to the demon of sloth it doubled his experience points need for leveling, but every time he tries to level up by fighting someone it takes a whole chapter for it to end then quickly goes over his gains just for the chapter to end then the next one goes on about someone else for a chapter or 2. All n all good story but slow progress 😁😁😁😁
sorry for the pacing. First time writing so a bit inexperienced in how i should pace the story. And i also don't want to skip and make the host Op too quick [img=recommend]
The_introvert:I mean I like the plot but it's just soooooooo slow, like when he evolved to the demon of sloth it doubled his experience points need for leveling, but every time he tries to level up by fighting someone it takes a whole chapter for it to end then quickly goes over his gains just for the chapter to end then the next one goes on about someone else for a chapter or 2. All n all good story but slow progress 😁😁😁😁
Good call Keep soldiering forward I like your story plot and story background very much Just don't drop the story incomplete please
Horny_feet:sorry for the pacing. First time writing so a bit inexperienced in how i should pace the story. And i also don't want to skip and make the host Op too quick [img=recommend]
