Review Detail of Obsidian_Light in VITALITY [BL]
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Absolutely love the characters, My Favorite thing about this is the main character he is a badas* but shows some vulnerability when it matters most ❤️. The downsides are the short chapters, there could be some more details added on to describe the world and the characters more. Also the updates ... its been a long time since the last update. Which really sucks cause i am looking forward to a lot more of this wonderful story!!!!!
VITALITY [BL]
Ascending_Darkness
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Ascending_Darkness:Thank you for your review, it really encouraged me to get back to writing.
Yep. There's still a long way to go with this story. I know it feels like it's currently lacking in details, but that's mainly due to the limitations of the character's perspectives. There will be further world building and details added in future chapters. Vitality is very much a slow-build story :)
Obsidian_Light:I am really happy this helped i really love this storyline and i hope you keep going !!