Ooooohhh!!!! This story is reaalllyy interesting!!! The plot is there, i like how you portray the characters emotions, how they react in a situation. The story have potential! Keep up the good work author! đđ
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Thanks for the feedback, Im very happy you liked it! Ill do my best to keep a consistent story in the future