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If you have any questions regarding the story I would try and answer them in the replies of this review. Now to the review. It's hard to assess your, own work. I won't give myself all five starts for everything and think that I'm the best. I'm not confident in my writing skill, but I hope that it's on the average level. I won't be able to update the novel frequently and write more than three chapters a week because of my work. Right now this is a hobby. The story development, characters, worldbuilding, all may be unnecessarily slow-paced or written without appropriate attention. Yet I hope that someone would find this story attractive and enjoyable. I don't need powerstones, if you want, you can spend them on a more deserving novel. I don't need hollow five-star reviews that don't describe the novel, but I would appreciate any, review, even one-star. As long as it describes what and where I should change and improve, ups and downs of this story.
Transmigrated as an NTR’ed protagonist.
SailusGebel
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Let me guess you want to suggest something like Solo Leveling?) I've read plenty of non-ntr manhwas and there are a few of them ongoing. Thanks for the suggestions but I doubt there is left something better than The Breaker, Veritas, or Volcanic Age.
Burberries:Hey author do you read ****hwa? I have a list of pretty good non ntr manhwa just let me know if you want XD
SailusGebel:Let me guess you want to suggest something like Solo Leveling?) I've read plenty of non-ntr manhwas and there are a few of them ongoing. Thanks for the suggestions but I doubt there is left something better than The Breaker, Veritas, or Volcanic Age.
I have a question before I start reading, will he get ntr'ed again? because some of the netori novels that I read made their mc's get cucked, and will he treat his harem like tools or will he love his harem. does he also learn how to fight to defend himself and his harem? P.S. : to clear up some potential confusion for future readers that misinterpret my question about ntr, I'm talking about the girl in the synopsis that cucked him not future harem members.
He will learn how to fight for all purposes I guess? Because it will be fun(for him), to earn money, to protect, to get revenge. About harem members. Their relationships won't be set in stone. When he gets their love it would stop developing, this won't be the case. He would end up in love with all the harem members but it would be a thorny road. At least I would try to do it. And actual harem members won't cheat on him. Will he get cucked? I'm kinda getting tired of this question.) But that's what I would get with a synopsis and title like this. If you think he can get "cucked" by someone he doesn't love then the answer is yes. As this is a first-person novel the "cheating" would be behind the scenes in the later chapters.
Plucas:I have a question before I start reading, will he get ntr'ed again? because some of the netori novels that I read made their mc's get cucked, and will he treat his harem like tools or will he love his harem. does he also learn how to fight to defend himself and his harem? P.S. : to clear up some potential confusion for future readers that misinterpret my question about ntr, I'm talking about the girl in the synopsis that cucked him not future harem members.
SailusGebel:He will learn how to fight for all purposes I guess? Because it will be fun(for him), to earn money, to protect, to get revenge. About harem members. Their relationships won't be set in stone. When he gets their love it would stop developing, this won't be the case. He would end up in love with all the harem members but it would be a thorny road. At least I would try to do it. And actual harem members won't cheat on him. Will he get cucked? I'm kinda getting tired of this question.) But that's what I would get with a synopsis and title like this. If you think he can get "cucked" by someone he doesn't love then the answer is yes. As this is a first-person novel the "cheating" would be behind the scenes in the later chapters.
Maybe I'm dumb because I don't get it. So can you explain it to me? Like you can only get NTR'ed if you have feelings for the said person or are in a relationship but if he doesn't love the person he has no reason to be in a relationship so how can he get NTR'ed in the later chapters?
SailusGebel:He will learn how to fight for all purposes I guess? Because it will be fun(for him), to earn money, to protect, to get revenge. About harem members. Their relationships won't be set in stone. When he gets their love it would stop developing, this won't be the case. He would end up in love with all the harem members but it would be a thorny road. At least I would try to do it. And actual harem members won't cheat on him. Will he get cucked? I'm kinda getting tired of this question.) But that's what I would get with a synopsis and title like this. If you think he can get "cucked" by someone he doesn't love then the answer is yes. As this is a first-person novel the "cheating" would be behind the scenes in the later chapters.
the mc doesn't really like the girl who ****ed the antagonist, the previous body owner liked thus he doesn't really feel betrayed or hurt. now whether you consider that ntr or not, I don't know.
PsyLoRD:Maybe I'm dumb because I don't get it. So can you explain it to me? Like you can only get NTR'ed if you have feelings for the said person or are in a relationship but if he doesn't love the person he has no reason to be in a relationship so how can he get NTR'ed in the later chapters?
YoungMaster_MtTai:the mc doesn't really like the girl who ****ed the antagonist, the previous body owner liked thus he doesn't really feel betrayed or hurt. now whether you consider that ntr or not, I don't know.
Everyone thinks differently about this one. I don't think this is NTR. Yet I've already seen a lot of comments that say this is NTR, as well as someone saying this ISN'T NTR. It depends on a person and his perception, nothing else.
PsyLoRD:That's not NTR not for the MC at least. For the previous owner, I guess it counts as ntr...
i think it is not ntr too but i don't want to see mc with the used slut that think she NTRed him. i am droping this
SailusGebel:Everyone thinks differently about this one. I don't think this is NTR. Yet I've already seen a lot of comments that say this is NTR, as well as someone saying this ISN'T NTR. It depends on a person and his perception, nothing else.
Sleep_Lust:i think it is not ntr too but i don't want to see mc with the used slut that think she NTRed him. i am droping this
Thanks for your kind words, I will keep working on it until it's finished. As for harem, I don't know how to write without spoilers. The girl on the cover will be in a harem.) The one who is close to the antagonist because there will be netori. Netori is when the protagonist steals girls. Four, a maximum of five girls will be in a harem.
Chance_Riggs_8570:Hello love novel and keep working on it I have so many novels and they just dropped them and can you give some hints on who be in the harem?
Who is close to the antagonist? Childhoodfriend? From what i read except for the *** dvd(if it is her) she is not close to him at all?
SailusGebel:Thanks for your kind words, I will keep working on it until it's finished. As for harem, I don't know how to write without spoilers. The girl on the cover will be in a harem.) The one who is close to the antagonist because there will be netori. Netori is when the protagonist steals girls. Four, a maximum of five girls will be in a harem.
Weezyf:Who is close to the antagonist? Childhoodfriend? From what i read except for the *** dvd(if it is her) she is not close to him at all?
I don't really know this myself. Probably around three hundred chapters, but I think the length would increase. It's a work in progress so I can't give you a definitive answer.
Steve_the_potato:How many chr will this novel have?