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Wow, I must say I was caught with the first chapters, the medieval setting is truly well done. I just had to continue reading your story. It is very descriptive and the plot is excellent and very refreshing. I must say it is not the kind of genre I usually read but I was really impressed with the way the characters were designed. I should say that maybe it would be better for the reading experience to have shorter paragraphs, but overall the writing quality is superb. Keep up the good work author![img=recommend]