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A nice start! You have large vocabulary of words that was shown in your novel in which I see it quite fun to read. I recommend you to read famous works like Harry Potter or lord of the rings to improve your work. Observing how they make a story while enjoying reading it and gaining insights on how to make a story that was like them. Your story will be gaining vast amounts of readers in the future so don't stop updating. BTW check out mine called Waking Up In Undead World. A slow start but quite enjoyable. Happy reviewing!