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Interesting start. A goodie cookie, I can see the movements of the characters and imagine it in a quite vivid way. The author can still polish this more and make it shine more. Hmnn, let' see what can I help with. I humbly advice to avoid using purely uppercase in the titles of your chapter. It's somehow painful to the eyes. And declutter the long paragraphs to simplify the read and make it easy on the yes. Nevertheless, I'm gonna lurk in darkness when more chappies are release again. Mehehe. May the author write more, edit more, and learn more, maybe earn more also.