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Review Detail of Xeoz in The Highschool Life of The King of the Underworld

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Xeoz
XeozLv103yrXeoz

Great story and plot... Well-written novel \\ The only problem I have are the way author changes the POV (not my taste), but overall unique story and interesting plot. I'm expecting great character development in the later chapters. \\ (Keep up the good work author-san)

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The Highschool Life of The King of the Underworld

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Degenerate_Raven
Degenerate_RavenAuthorDegenerate_Raven

Thank you for the review and I'll keep what you said in mind about the POV. It's just that some scenes feel weird when the MC is narrating it, so I change it to a third person narration for a better experience. I'll try to keep it has minimal as possible

3yr
Xeoz
XeozLv10Xeoz

Even without the brackets you can still use 3rd POV, for some certain scenarios though. Just feels weird to me, when I see brackets are used to imply 3rd POV scenarios.

3yr
Xeoz
XeozLv10Xeoz

But yeah you do you.

3yr
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