I love this story, it's very creative and the characters are perfect with their strengths and flaws. The punctuation, grammar, and spelling could be better, but over all the writing itself has a nice vocabulary level and the plot and story line makes the story interesting to read. The characters themselves have their own personalities and are pretty well written. The background of the different world is also pretty well-organized.
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