Review Detail of Light_ray in Tales of Warrior Juan Swift

A historical novel I really loved it as soon as I read the synopsis. The protagonist wants to make an identity of himself that's to be a great warrior. Your writing skills are amazing with good character and background development but the only thing you've to work up on is to give some gaps in while writing. Long passage generally don't preferred by many so just give some gaps in the passages. Overall the novel's concept is great. One will definitely enjoy reading this.