Review Detail of Green_duckling in The Serpent Emperor

Writing Quality: 1 star Compared to some of the other books on this site, the grammar isn’t actually that bad but what I do hate is that it’s like they’re having two conversations at once. Like Sidney would say somegthing and then say something else and then Azalea would reply to what he said first and then what he said second. It might just be me but I was really confused reading it. Also there is a chapter just filled with a few repeated paragraphs. Updating Stability: 5 stars It’s completed so I really don’t know but without this 5 star rating the overall rating would only be 1.8 Story Development: 1 star They fell in love just on their first day together, even though Sidney swears he wants to take it slow. Character Design: 2 stars They do a good enough job for Sidney, giving him a personality, background, and describing at least some of his features, but with Azalea, she has no personality and then suddenly becomes flirty, is overly calm about the situation even though she was sober when he proposed and they don’t even describe her features for like 20 episodes but then when they finally do all it is is we find out her hair is ebony black-brown. And she seems heavily uninterested in meeting her parents, which I could understand but she should at least be a little bit hesitant to decline his offer. World Background: 2 stars They do a good enough job about being diverse in the places Sidney and Azalea go but there’s no description about it so when they were walking around the company building I just imagined the most generic thing possible and they don’t even describe the penhouse so it’s just a regular apartment in my mind. Overall Rating: 2.6 stars It could have been better, really, and it isn’t even the story I was promised from the synopsis so I’m heavily disappointed in this book, please author, take this review as creative criticism and polish up the book a bit and change the synopsis :)