Review Detail of Levianeus in Commonwealth

There is also ntr, female exploitation, rap*, and sharing of a woman with other men. The Author is also very disturbingly anti-christian. I don't have anything against that, but he constantly mentions it and twists everything to suit the narrative. Even as a non-believer, it left a sour feeling in my mouth at his disrespect.

yea...that's why I dropped too

Usually I don't respond to reviews because they don't matter much to me. What I writes can be criticized for style, grammar and errors, etc. But to say that there is ... ntr in the novel, sharing women or is anti-Christian is a lie. The only time an MC "shares a woman" is when he has paid for *** and when he is done he also paid for the pleasure of his two soldiers. Showing copruction and criticizing negative behavior suddenly makes you anti-Christian? Negative behavior towards women is true.

I'm sorry, what?! Since when did forcefully r*vishing an innkeeper's wife is not assault? Then you 'share' with your troops, which I am quite sure fills the case for my accusations. Svet was also quite against it in the beginning, wasn't she? And your work is incredibly anti-christian. I don't care for it normally, but when you write about r*ing a woman and then twisting a religion's sacred words, it is intentionally demeaning and quite sick.

pay a woman to f*ck her and then give her to your soldiers, in my opinion it is not ntr, after all he never claimed her as his, he simply paid for her services, it was a one-time thing.

my guy... your too pure man You ever heard of... strip clubs? You ever heard of... brothels? OH and most of all- you ever heard of... history whatsoever?

I'm not saying it doesn't happen, I'm just saying the author is putting in his self insert as if he doesn't do any of this stuff. I also pointed out the power fantasy that the novel is.