Review Detail of PurpleSpring in Commonwealth

Writing Quality: Good writing quality over all with only a few mistakes here and there, that can easily be ignored. World Background: poland in 1600... Nothing much too it, descriptions leave something to be desired. Story Development: The story does not feel unique in any way and is pretty generic. (Guy gets sent back in time, builds territory up). Fine if you like the kingdom/territory building genre. + 18 stuff Character Design: One of the major problems with the story from my point of view is the protagonist. He is a hypocrite. An example would be the first +18 chapter where he suddenly rapes a 37 year old maid with a husband and 3 children... She somehow gives in to his "sexual skills" and becomes okay with it after a few months timeskip in the same chapter... Around chapter 9 protagonist let his soldiers/troops rape enemy after a battle and says he does not tolerate it and never do something like that even though he did the same thing in chapter 6. Even worse, next chapter (chapter 10) he goes and rapes another married middle aged woman... At this point it just feels like the authors fetish is leaking into the novel way too much and im droping the novel due to the hypocricy of the protagonist ... :d Overall if you enjoy kingdom/territory building and ponographic content with other peoples wifes, go on and read. The quality of the writing is good and author seems passionate about the novel. Just not my cup of coffe :)