Review Detail of winterdaisy55 in YukiHana

Good job!! The first chapter itself is pretty interesting, I hoped to read more of this! There were a few typos that i caught, maybe you can re-check on the chapter. Still, it was not a big problem. For the first chapter, it's still confusing to me to know who is who, but maybe it will be better as the story continues. Anyway, it's nice to read such cute high school story. Keep on writing!