Review Detail of victorines in YukiHana

First of all, the first part has a cute resolution! I'll give a credit to that. Nevertheless, I think you should post a character profile first before the first chapter. It sort of confuses me as I read the introduction part. But, don't get me wrong. The story's great. Or maybe you can just have a 3-5 sentences to describe your characters. Also, some typos. (I know it's inevitable for us to have some misspelled words) ex. "appealing", "chili" But, anyway, keep up the good work! Hope this review helps. Glad you created a good craft as this. :)