Review Detail of Eggy_does_writing in Dawning Skye

I've read a couple of chapters with my boyfriend so far and this story is really interesting! Skye is a very strong woman. I really enjoyed her internal monologues. I also enjoyed the fact that the author was able to write accents for some of the characters (including the MC). The descriptions of the settings, characters, and clothes are vivid. The character design is really thorough. It's easy to figure out who is supposed to be who. Skye is my favorite character and my boyfriend really likes Tidas. There were a few grammatical errors. Also, I like the fact that Skye refuses to conform to ridiculous gender expectations during that time period but I didn't like the fact that she kept on saying that she is not like other women. Overall, great story! I am looking forward to reading more