Review Detail of RoseOfBlues in Once Upon A Time (Story of The Betrothed and Farah)

Creating a fantasy story is a tricky piece of work as it is a world of the author's imagination. Given this, the description of the surroundings and the characters' clothes can make one see this fictional world as if it were real. I think you need to work a little more on expressing the characters' appearances. A few grammatic errors that need to be corrected. Other than that, the story is truely exceptional.