Review Detail of varean in Fleur-de-Lis

This is my first time reading a "stalker" novel since I don't read much thriller. I can say that you've really hooked me with your first few chapters, the length of the story is just right and I can't seem to stop reading. A few things I'd like to point out is your description, I feel that if you could enhance your writing to be more descriptive, it would bring much more thrill and the readers can feel your characters even more. There are also a bit of grammatical errors so it would be better if you'll go back to your chapters and edit a little bit here and there. Besides those points, you've put up an intriguing story so keep up the good work.