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2020-08-09 13:08

Oof, I may be biased since I 100% support fellow filipino authors, but in all honesty I like the story so far! Narration is great, but the sentences could use abit more of revisions so that the story can be more descriptive, but all-in-all i love the story so far. This story is interesting indeed, recognize it PEOPLE!!💕 More updates please, author!!💕

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Thank you so muuchhh! 💓🥺

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