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Review Detail of G_Constraint in Pointless Plunder

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I love this idea! The writing quality is just a bit lacking, but it completely overshadows the other novels on this site and in the WPC! It isn't updated as frequently as I'd like, maybe that'll change when the contest is over? I know these things can be taxing. I love the main character, and Andro too. Tobias thinks as a normal person would, and he cracks tons of amazing jokes (so does the narrator), and Andro's personality is sort of adorable, I can't wait to see more of Andro. The world seems like it is developing to be huge, I want to see more on magic and Theos soon. Overall, this is a great novel for the site it is on, and I can't wait 'till it gets more updates.

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AAAAA tysmmmhymh6timh! I think the reason the quality could be lacking is that I am trying my best to experiment with new writing techniques... I'll get better! And tysmmmm for loving my characters and world, I put my heart and soul into making Andro lol... I'll struggle with pacing at times, but bare with me!