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(Comment translated with google translator) Well, this is a story of a typical Japanese MC with an ero massage system, that is, a guy without personality who won a system worthy of protagonists like Konrad or Nik farran (if they are men of culture they will know about them) system that by the way outlines as a slave (although the author wants to fix it by putting the MC as a "jailer" of the women whom he gives massages) The protagonist is the typical virgin boy who watches **** and hentai, who is in love with his friend who has a boyfriend (words of the author) and all he does is wait for her to end that relationship so that he even tries something with her. His personality is very bad and that is not a good thing, since even the protagonists of shonen have a good attitude from the beginning, even if they are weak (perhaps because he is young or that is the author's excuse, since you cannot cite the real world if in your novel almost everyone has a system, nothing is normal) With regard to the friend of the mc, the author tries to justify his unique sexual life as "terrible" with the only option that we have empathy for her and we have no problems in opening her legs to the mc due to her experience with her boyfriend is very bad with respect to the mc, for her to leave her boyfriend and stay by the mc's side because of his system (if she wanted to put netori content, you'd better use another girl, not her only friend). Think about it, if the protagonist did not have that system, she will easily spread her legs to another guy who has an ero system, because she is dissatisfied If you came for the wincest tag, let me tell you that as the novel goes, it occurs between chapters 100-200 Finally, the mc allows himself to be blackmailed very easily and presents such a passive attitude that it is embarrassing, I hope that changes

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EgocentricPoliceD
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Chapter 100-200 where you find so much? Either way,mc sounds like huge loser and petty excuse for author writing impotency ... Ugh, not gonna try.

max360
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depending on the pace at which the novel is going and the MC's attitude, at least after 100 chapters I think he will achieve something significant with his stepsisters

EgocentricPoliceD:Chapter 100-200 where you find so much? Either way,mc sounds like huge loser and petty excuse for author writing impotency ... Ugh, not gonna try.
Shaades71_Ps4
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What chapter did the author say that the MC was in love with Katie?

max360
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In chapter 13 when the mc sees the label "netori" he thinks about how he fell in love with his friend

Shaades71_Ps4:What chapter did the author say that the MC was in love with Katie?
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Lmaoooo, having a crush on someone is very different than falling in love. Shiiii I’ve had crushes before but I sure as hell never LOVED any of them.

max360:In chapter 13 when the mc sees the label "netori" he thinks about how he fell in love with his friend
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I don't know if it's a language problem, but I said that MC was in love with his friend, but platonic love (like all teenagers) I didn't say that he was obsessed with that love {Google translator}

Shaades71_Ps4:Lmaoooo, having a crush on someone is very different than falling in love. Shiiii I’ve had crushes before but I sure as hell never LOVED any of them.
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Love has nothing to do with obsession, and platonic love is still another form of love which author never said anything about. There is a reason why kids in middle school or high school say “I like you,” instead of I love you to either their crushes or bf/gf. It’s because they are either not ready for the commitment that love entails or it’s simply because they don’t know love is. Any form of love is different than a crush, in fact, a crush is worth even less than saying “I like you,” in my opinion. Now, I can understand if you made the assumption that the MC had unrequited love for Katie as farfetched as it sounds, but to say the author said it clearly isn’t true.

max360:I don't know if it's a language problem, but I said that MC was in love with his friend, but platonic love (like all teenagers) I didn't say that he was obsessed with that love {Google translator}
EraldrirTheGrey
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MInd telling me wich novel nik farran is from? I know konrad but never heard of the other.

max360
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Godness collector: every goles is a goal by FanHarem

EraldrirTheGrey:MInd telling me wich novel nik farran is from? I know konrad but never heard of the other.
Rafian
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i don't think you should even try to compare this mc with konard . konard is incomparable to begin with not to mention the novel was a master piece. it's like my most favourite novel in here. this novel or mc is completely incomparable to profane prince and it's character and it's author.

max360:Godness collector: every goles is a goal by FanHarem
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That is why I say that the system is only for someone of the caliber of konrad

Rafian:i don't think you should even try to compare this mc with konard . konard is incomparable to begin with not to mention the novel was a master piece. it's like my most favourite novel in here. this novel or mc is completely incomparable to profane prince and it's character and it's author.
SD_Liv
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what kind of fanfic?

Rafian:i don't think you should even try to compare this mc with konard . konard is incomparable to begin with not to mention the novel was a master piece. it's like my most favourite novel in here. this novel or mc is completely incomparable to profane prince and it's character and it's author.
Rafian
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it's a original novel

SD_Liv:what kind of fanfic?
SD_Liv
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Eh, okay, what's the name of this novel?

Rafian:it's a original novel
Rafian
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profane prince of domination

SD_Liv:Eh, okay, what's the name of this novel?
SD_Liv
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Thx

Rafian:profane prince of domination