This is a review to chapter 10, and I currently plan to continue to read it as it is quite good. The story is a time traveling revenge plot at it's core, and within the first 10 chapters that is all that has been discussed. To date the Female Lead (FL) has been very flushed out and developed and the Female Antagonist (FA) is starting to get more development. The major supporting characters have been only lightly touched (with the first 10 chapters), but enough to understand their point in the story and get a "general" feel for them. Lastly, the world building is slow, but continuously interwoven in the chapters as they go. Which I feel is the best way to parse it out. P.S. Though, I hate these types of comparisons it is a good short-hand to get a feel for a story. This story to date is similar to The Villainess Reverses the Hourglass with the FL and FA flipped, and less magic (though magic is slowly getting talked about in the World Background so that may change in later chapters).
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hi, thanks for all your comments and for reading! it's always nice to know that people are reading and thinking about my work :) although aldl is also a romance story, the main point will, yes, be revenge, and i was actually inspired by the villainess reverses the hourglass (but i tried to make my story as original as possible and change many aspects of the story). this is my first novel, but i'm glad to see that you're enjoying it! i can also assure you that later chapters will clear some things up, including the issue of her father, etc.
