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I don't know, man I feel conflicted too many romances out there. People love writing romances. I will give writing quality 5 never care about that, a story that's what's important, quality can be updated story won't be saved if its trash. stability of updates 5, Story development is slow, seems slow, but gives a feeling that everything's going on its own course. it seems nothing majors happening but something always goes down. like Zubair's and Ayan's conflict spiced things up and gave depth to the characters, but it's not enough, the story needs a unique trait that will make it different from other contemporary romances. Development 4. character design I like almost everyone, except the main character she seven parts annoying, four parts still child, mostly in denial, doesn't seem to know herself well at her goddamn age, five parts kind, caring, overall conflicted about her still don't like her. Ayan is he a man or beta? don't know yet. But his great and has depth to him. Why does he like Naira don't know yet truly. Character design 3. world background, not that important giving 5. opinion is subjective I can change it for worse or for good.

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