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Primordiales
PrimordialesLv34yr
2020-08-17 03:03

It was good at the beginning ... But you make the same mistake that everyone who makes fanfiction of this novel ... You give too much attention to ayanokuiji and you leave your character as nothing, that takes weight off the story and always ends up being a cheap copy of the novel with one more character ....... I hope it changes it is boring to reread the original story only with one extra character ......

Leisure Life: Classroom of The Elite

Felix9713
4.8
88 Chs

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Felix9713
Felix9713Author

You don't read the synopsis, do you?

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Primordiales
PrimordialesLv3

You're right, I just read it ..... Well it doesn't matter in the end it will still be boring if you always do that, but it's your novel at the end .... I'm just saying that if you wanted to make a secondary character, you would have done the novel on the dot ayanokouji's view and you wouldn't have bothered to show us the protagonist just to take weight off his presence ..... I'm just saying that

Felix9713:You don't read the synopsis, do you?
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Felix9713
Felix9713Author

Well, that's fine, just saying that your review didn't really give me anything since it is already incorporated in the synopsis, still appreciate your review. Not to mention it is still in its early stage. Maybe try to write more details about what you mean by giving too much attention to Ayanakoji.

Primordiales:You're right, I just read it ..... Well it doesn't matter in the end it will still be boring if you always do that, but it's your novel at the end .... I'm just saying that if you wanted to make a secondary character, you would have done the novel on the dot ayanokouji's view and you wouldn't have bothered to show us the protagonist just to take weight off his presence ..... I'm just saying that
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Shub_Niggurath
Shub_NiggurathLv4

The story begining as always is really good and for people who don't want to read it because author-san said the MC will be an average nobody don't worry it can be seen clearly that the MC is not your everyday normal person and he will not fall behind Ainakoji or whatever his name was by a lot , not in fitness nor in intelligence . Oh and the mc isn't some dump **** who can't see people ploting or giving him a nasty eye. I love this author and all his works up until now so i'm expecting something legendary like his other works.

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Setivan_01
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I have been following you since the first book. Very good writer with a good story, even if you say that this story will be a relaxed theme and a secondary character with a theme to the original plot. I long to read what you will write. Recommended writer, read his other works.

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Shub_Niggurath
Shub_NiggurathLv4

I know what you mean writing a complicated or even a original plot amd actually finishing it is just that hard so it's good to do some slice of life fanfics specially since you didn't continue the first one about felix.

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Roxy_Greyrat21
Roxy_Greyrat21Lv4

Honestly for me its good. But I just think I like Felix(Your past fic) much better than Yuichi tho. Yuichi is like a godly character good in everything bla bla bla... Everytime he has thoughts to someone or something Its like he can read minds or maybe he read the light novel before getting Isekaid here that it sometimes irritate me reading his thoughts. Honestly I think its BS for him to be in Class D. I also think he is like a wannabe cool guy(Joining 2 clubs at onc. Not studying despite being intelligent like he wants to say he's Lelouch from Code Geass.) Felix has good backstory, realistic personality, good character development, and most of all mysterious. By the way no offence intended and I'd like for the story to continue. I think it will be good.

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Blue_planet
Blue_planetLv4

The story is probably dropped... don't waste your time. .

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DarkTSM
DarkTSMLv2

It is pretty good, I miss your old Elite Classroom fanfic. Hopefully you don't drop this one, I am a huge fan of your Akame Ga Kill fanfic. Now, about this novel/fanfic, the only thing I will say about this is the MC's personality, is confusing for some, including me. But, he talks like Oreki Houtaru from Hyouka with the concept of using his energy and all that jazz. Why is it confusing? His personality took a literal 180, from one event. Maybe because he was naive? And that made his mind succumb to- I don't know what I am saying anymore. Basically, for me, he has three personalities. The laid back one, the naive and enthusiastic one, and finally the sadistic and ruthless one. The laid back attitude was made from both the naive and sadistic one though. I have to say though, this AIN'T gonna be a leisure life for the MC.

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Pavan1234
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Very good, close to Excellent. (I will write another review at the end of this fanfiction) Mc's characterization and character interactions are the highlights of this fanfic. Plot premise & Plot progression are very good. This novel is better than his previous Classroom of the elite fanfiction (especially in introducing Mc's character & Mc's background). Finally, Thanks for choosing slightly less popular stories to write fanfiction, instead of DXD, Naruto or One piece (there are just too many of them).

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Cuzin
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OMG , this is perfect , its been a while since i got vibes from fan fiction , thank you very much for writing this masterpiece ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ i hope you complete writing this and please don't drop it im totally into the story ❤️❤️

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leo26
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All I can say is after reading your past novels, you have definitely improved, not to say that your past novels were bad they were really good but this one takes the cake. You have an Mc with his own personality trait which I like very much, he can be both apathetic and a social butterfly at the same time and it doesn't feel unnatural. The interaction with other characters also feels natural so for me this novel is a 5/5.

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