Review Detail of varean in To Fight Fire

Item: To Fight Fire
Rating: 4.4

Review detail

vareanLv23yrvarean

I love the close relationship between the twins. As a person with a sibling, I envy them. The flow of the story is just right and so is the length of the chapters. There are two things I just hope that you can work on which are the background and the synopsis. The synopsis doesn't really explain much so I hope you can improve it a little bit. Overall your story seems really interesting and I love your characters. Keep it up! Keep writing 💓

To Fight Fire

chaoticenigmas

Liked it!

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chaoticenigmasAuthorchaoticenigmas

Hi, thanks for reviewing. I'll work on the synopsis, but the background is gonna hit you very hard (I hope you won't get hurt) when you realise what exactly is happening in the story. ~Lis

3yr

vareanLv2varean

I'm excited I know you'll do just fine 😊

chaoticenigmas:Hi, thanks for reviewing. I'll work on the synopsis, but the background is gonna hit you very hard (I hope you won't get hurt) when you realise what exactly is happening in the story. ~Lis

3yr