Review Detail of Commissar in The 8th continent

Item: The 8th continent
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

CommissarLv53yrCommissar

It has potential, although I think you should go slower to develop the story better, since it feels like everything happens too fast, still great job

SaphiR

Liked by 2 people

SaphiRAuthorSaphiR

Thank you! I understand I will slow down the pace of the story so that you understand everything and that there is enough information!

3yr

Knights_ErrantLv3Knights_Errant

Yes, I agree. Some filler on daily problems in the city and politics of the empire could make for great reading!

SaphiR:Thank you! I understand I will slow down the pace of the story so that you understand everything and that there is enough information!

3yr